Well done Jess. Your first slide is clearly explained and your second slide gives a clear explanation of recent related events. Your opinions have been given as quotes, but do not say who the quote is from, or give any background information to explain. Perhaps the opinions would be more effective if they discussed the strongs views people expressed about Key not attending the previous two funerals, just as you did in your editorial? Well done Jess on managing your time well and getting this task completed.
Well done Jess. Your first slide is clearly explained and your second slide gives a clear explanation of recent related events.
ReplyDeleteYour opinions have been given as quotes, but do not say who the quote is from, or give any background information to explain. Perhaps the opinions would be more effective if they discussed the strongs views people expressed about Key not attending the previous two funerals, just as you did in your editorial?
Well done Jess on managing your time well and getting this task completed.